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This special Person by *DraculeaRiccy:iconDraculeaRiccy:

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Have you ever met this special someone?
You just have to look at this person and you know
It's true
You wanna lay your hands around her
Feel her soft skin
And strangle her till she doesn't move anymore
She makes you mad just because she's there
You'd love to hear her scream and see her suffer
Enjoying all her pain
You don't really know why you hate her with such a passion...
There is no reason
Did you ever met this special someone?
©2008-2009 *DraculeaRiccy
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Author's Comments

You thought this is a stupid love poem, didn't you? ;P Well, I was just angry on somebody in my class and I had a good idea for a poem...that's the reasno why it's a female person...but it could of course also be a guy...:D

If you see any mistakes, please tell me :)

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~Ameatypie Oct 29, 2008, 10:59:32 AM
well that took an interesting turn... lol

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*Pumpkin-frog Oct 29, 2008, 11:48:05 AM
I agree with Ameatypie That did take an interesting turn.
Way to sneak up on someone Dracula. :D

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*yatesmon Oct 29, 2008, 1:10:21 PM
:rofl: quality work, from it's thumbnail, it does read like a love poem....which I did find different Riccy;)....but my faith is restored ;P

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~Psychosomatic-Psyche Oct 29, 2008, 1:26:02 PM
Wow ... I liked this poem actually. :dance:

And I agree with what ~Ameatypie said. :D

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=Malandante Oct 29, 2008, 2:57:05 PM
I love they way you begin it and make the reader believe that it is heading in one direction and then bam it turns to a completely different one. Excellent :clap:

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*DraculeaRiccy Oct 30, 2008, 10:37:50 AM
thanks a lot :) I got a sick sense of humour...:D

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*DraculeaRiccy Oct 30, 2008, 10:38:08 AM
thankies :aww:

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*DraculeaRiccy Oct 30, 2008, 10:46:01 AM
haha, glad you like it :D I'm sooooo not romantic...so I thought I should write an anti love poem...and the fact that I was pissed off gave me some inspiration...:XD:

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*DraculeaRiccy Oct 30, 2008, 10:47:15 AM
...just a love poem...how I like it :D

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