A nurse takes me into room no.3
The radio is playing a happy song
If you really have to, then go ahead and slit my wrists
Let me see the pretty flowers and tell me that everything's alright
All the people dressed in white are smiling but I don't want to be one of them
If you really have to, go ahead and cut my stomach open
Take out all the hate and let me see the pretty cloud
Close the window, I don't wanna hear them screaming
And the radio is playing a happy song
If you really have to, go ahead and open up my skull
Cut out all the ugly thought and let me see the pretty butterflies
I want to be happy again
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It has been a long time since I last wrote something...and today I felt like writing another little poem.
I don't want to explain this...you can think I'm a crazy psycho or whatever...I don't really care. Anyway, if you find any mistakes, please tell me  I give =darkclub permission to show my work in their gallery. Comments
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-- ...I pondered in candlelit lethargy. I grieved as the wax melted, knowing...Tomorrow I must hurt you... -- -Sweet Nightmares-  Insane and proud of it! ♣  Keep SMILING ♣My Guardian Angel - Contest --> [link] -- ...I pondered in candlelit lethargy. I grieved as the wax melted, knowing...Tomorrow I must hurt you...  well...I do think you're a crazy psycho, and I don't care!..
 ...looks like a poem writen by someone who was in an old madhouse or something...^^U-- sorry 4 any mistake,still practicing my english..^^U DO WHAT YOU LOVE!!! haha, thanks
-- -Sweet Nightmares- Insane and proud of it! ♣ Keep SMILING ♣My Guardian Angel - Contest --> [link]  This is a pretty good poem from the perspective of a mentally ill person desperate to "get better." Whether it's a character or a vague confession, I can't say for certain.
 If I can offer any way to possibly improve on it, it might be to add more description. thanks a lot for the little crituque...or suggestion. glad you like it
 -- -Sweet Nightmares- Insane and proud of it! ♣ Keep SMILING ♣My Guardian Angel - Contest --> [link]  awesome piece...I really like it
 thanks
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