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Come and walk through the door
Into a world ruled by madness
Can you feel it?
It's crawling  under your skin
Digging a way into you brain
Like a hungry parasite
A cold chill runs down your spine
when you cross the threshold to my empire
Can you hear them whisper?
Can you hear them pray?
They will give their life
For the sake of science
There will be a new race of mankind
A perfection of humanity
When the screaming begins
I am god
In my Asylum
©2008-2009 *DraculeaRiccy
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...couldn't sleep last night.

If you see any mistakes, please tell me :)

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:iconh3ikal:
Stunningly brilliant, what and the way you described the sensations is horrifying and terror-inducing.
:icontotaldestruction628:
lol, luv it, I like the way the last line changes the whole concept of the poem, its great

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:icondraculeariccy:
thanks a lot :)

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:icondraculeariccy:
thanks :aww:

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:iconlove-fate-mizery:
i really like this.
especially the part: "i am god, in my asylum"
:icondraculeariccy:
thanks a lot :)

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:iconvampiressartist:
Oooh, I can really feel the haunting shivers and cold, bony hands running down my back.

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:icondraculeariccy:
...then it served its purpose :D

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:iconwebster14:
a nice fear inducing poem:)...love it:love:

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